The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

university. and

incorrect use of a conjunction

university and

university. He

he come back

form  third person singular + base form + s/es

He comes back...

 

 

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

Why do I still have to correct mistakes about the form of the simple present tense?

 

But she has affair with Benjamin.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

But she

She

has affair

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Has an affair

 

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

After/ When Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

Spelling truly

when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

When Elaine gets married, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away.

Conjunctions join verbs in a list.

 

 

So he nervous about his future.

he feels/ is / gets nervous about his future.

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Ben is timid, stupid person

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Ben is a timid, stupid person

Ben is a timid and stupid person

Conjunctions join adjectives in a list.

Mrs. Robinson is selfish and greed person.

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greed person.

Noun greed\ adjective greedy

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

Ben is timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson is very very attractive, erotic

 

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

 

 

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I.

how did I.     what would I do?

Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson

Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson

 

 

 

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.

 

I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

Not only A, but also B