One of my Favorite Restaurants

One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

What items are on the menu?

There are many kinds of item on the menu. For example jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean others are on the menu.

Items

. For example,  jajangmyean , jjangbbong  and Tray jajangmyean are on the menu.

Jajangmyean -> noodles with bean sauce.

Jjangbbong  -> spicy noodles with seafood and soup,  Spicy seafood noodle soup*

Tray jajangmyean  Noodles in a black bean sauce served on a tray*

 

My favorite restaurant is mom's touch in Koreatech.
There are so many menu.
My favorite food is 싸이burger.

My favorite restaurant is mom’s touch located in Koreatech.

There are so many food to choice in the menu.

So many foods to choose from on the menu

My favorite food is thigh burger.

mom's touch in Koreatech. Mom’s Touch in Koreatech.

There are so many menu. There are so many items on the menu.

My favorite food is 싸이burger. My favorite item on the menu is Psy burger…..

My favorite restaurant is Mom’s Touch, located near the front entrance of Koreatech.

My favorite item on the menu is the Psy burger.

This is buffet restaurant. Menu has only one list.

This is buffet restaurant. -> It is buffet restaurant.

Menu has only one list. -> This restaurant has only one item on the menu.

This is a buffet restaurant. You can eat many foods.

 

There is a lot of food on the menu.
For example, grilled pork belly, steamed rice bowl, miso soup and many drinks.

There are a lot of foods on the menu.

miso soup    fermented soybean soup

 

 

 

It wraps up grind meat and some vegetables in dough like pizza’s dough but it is as small as palm’s size.

Dumplings / countable, usually plural

 

MacDonald is worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of menu.

McDonald is a worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of items of menu.

 

Also It has different menus. For example Fried vegetable, noodles, some drinks etc. Many people are there. Why do I like this restaurants? Because It is my first restaurants with my girlfriend in Chun an. When I came to Chun an first time. I said to her "I want to eat korean fast food." She took me to there. And another reason is that I've been to many korean fast food, but 떡볶이나라 is the best , also quantity and quality are good value for money. So I like to go there.

Also it has lots of items on the menu. 

For example, Fried vegetable, noodles and some drinks etc.

For example, there are fried vegetables, noodles, some drinks and etc.*

There are many people in the restaurant.

Why do I like this restaurant?

I like this restaurant because it is the first restaurant in Cheonan that I went to with my girlfriend.

 

 

I like Korean food. One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Cheonan. It's called LA북창동순두부찌개. This restaurant's soft tofu stew is very delicious. On the menu, there are normal soft tofu stew, dumpling soft tofu stew, sea food soft tofu stew and so on. I like sea food soft tofu stew better than the others.
To get there: Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan. Ride for 40 minutes. Get off at the Cheonan bus terminal stop. Walk about 50 meters. It's cross the Arario park. It is 2nd floor on a building. You can find it.

Nice work

 

 

If you have a some time, I recommend that you go there.

have some time       time NC

On the menu there is just two selection. Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.
There are many side dishes like raw garlics, onions and some fresh lettuce.

There are just two selections on the menu.

Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.

Beef sirloin and beef sashimi.

raw garlics

garlic NC

 

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serve has many garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serves has a lot of garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

and is called boiled garlic or fried garlic.

Grilled Beef Tripe is made of intestines(?) of a cow.

Tripe is one of the stomachs of a cow.

[Correct]I like this restaurant because they serves Kimchi bean sprouts soup for [an] appetizer.

they serves     they serve

Last Night

Last Night

 

Last night I had dinner with some friends of mine.  First we ate pork at a local restaurant.  Then we went to a friend’s house.  We listened to some music.  After we listened to music, we decided to go to Yawoori. 

                  We hung out in Yawoori for a while and then I felt tired.  I said goodbye to my friends before I got into a cab and went home.

Use words such as "first, then, next, before, and after" to put the events in order.

The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

university. and

incorrect use of a conjunction

university and

university. He

he come back

form  third person singular + base form + s/es

He comes back...

 

 

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

Why do I still have to correct mistakes about the form of the simple present tense?

 

But she has affair with Benjamin.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

But she

She

has affair

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Has an affair

 

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

After/ When Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine.

Spelling truly

when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

When Elaine gets married, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away.

Conjunctions join verbs in a list.

 

 

So he nervous about his future.

he feels/ is / gets nervous about his future.

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Ben is timid, stupid person

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Ben is a timid, stupid person

Ben is a timid and stupid person

Conjunctions join adjectives in a list.

Mrs. Robinson is selfish and greed person.

Use “a/an” or “the” with the singular form of countable nouns

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greed person.

Noun greed\ adjective greedy

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

Ben is timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson is very very attractive, erotic

 

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

 

 

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I.

how did I.     what would I do?

Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson

Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson

 

 

 

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.

 

I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

Not only A, but also B

One of my favorite restaurants

One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Chungcheon Nam Do.  It’s called 꺼먹돼지.  The pork is excellent.  The owner of the restaurant raises the pigs on his farm which is located a few kilometers away from the restaurant.  He even grows the vegetables for the side dishes.  His wife’s kimchi is very spicy and a little sour.  The scallion kimchi is my favorite.  It’s a korean barbecue restaurant, so you cook the meat yourself over coals.  I think it’s fun to flip the meat over with a pair of tongs and to cut the meat into bite-sized pieces with a pair of scissors. I like to add a little bit of sea salt while the meat is cooking.  If you like, you can also grill onions, rice cake, and garlic while the meat is cooking.  When everything is ready, I like to wrap up a piece of pork, some grilled onions, a sliver of raw garlic, and some red pepper paste in a piece of fresh lettuce.  Mmmm…. Delicious!

 

 

To get there:  Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan.  Ride for about 20 minutes.  Get off at the Dong Woo Apartments stop.  Walk East about 25 meters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is your favorite kind of food?

 

Where do you eat it?

 

What items are on the menu?

 

What is your favorite dish on the menu?

 

How can you get there from campus?

 

Write about your favorite restaurant.

The Graduate

The Graduate

 

Ben has recently graduated from a university.  T or F

 

During the day, Ben goes to many job interviews.  T or F

 

Ben has an affair with Mrs. Robinson.  T or F

 

Elaine is Mrs. Robinson’s younger sister.  T or F

 

Ben and Elaine eventually get married.  T or F

 

 

Describe the setting.

Describe two of the characters.

What do you think about this movie?