Week one corrections

Evening class corrections.  Week  1

 

I'm freshman.

I'm a freshman.

Singular form of countable nouns – requires an article, (a, an, the.)

 

I have 4 family except me.

There are five people in my family including me.

 

My hobby is too many.

Too + many + countable noun

Too + much + noncountable noun

Too + adjective

Negative

 

I have so many hobbies.

So + many + countable noun

So + much + NONcountable noun

So + adjective

emphasis

 

My habit is biting my nails. So my nails so short.

                                                          Missing verb (are)

FANBOYS   for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so.      Conjunctions join two sentences.

My habit is biting my nails, so my nails are so short.

My family members are parents, younger sister and me.

I have parents and a younger sister.

 

I'm 21 years old, sophomore in Koreatech.

Run on sentence

Missing subject

Missing verb

Article

Incorrect preposition

I'm 21 years old and I’m a sophomore at Koreatech.

 

I'm smoker. I know smoking is harmful. But i can't stop because of toxication.

Article

I'm a smoker.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

harmful but

Always capitalize “I”

because of toxication.

Wrong word.

because I’m addicted to nicotine.

 

My family is consisted of me, mother, father, and one older brother.

I have a mother, a father, and an older brother.

 

 

I don't well english. Because i'm korean it’s no wonder. But i want to well english. So i will endeavor in jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I don't well english.

Missing verb.    speak

Word order

I don’t speak English well.

Capitalize the name of languages.

Because i'm korean

Capitalize “I”

But i want to well english. So i will endeavor in jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I want to speak English well, so I will endeavor in Jason’s class and talk to many foreigners.

 

I'm 21 years olds.  And I live in Cheonan.

I'm 21 years old and I live in Cheonan.

 

i'm a sophmore in koreatech and my majors in mechatronics control system. therefore i interest in green enery.

I’m a sophomore at Koreatech and I major in Mechatronics control system.  Therefore I’m interested in green energy.

I major in Mechatronics

My major is Mechatronics

 

my hometown is Daegu. But now i am living in studio apartment near my university.

My hometown is Daegu, but now I am living in a studio apartment near my university.

Capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

 

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

there  - location        I live there.

there is

there are               existence

There is not very famous.

Buyeo is not very famous.

There is very important place in history.

It is a very important place in history.

There was a capital of Bakjae.

The capital of Baekjae was there.

There is so many tourist attraction.

There are so many tourist attractions.

 

I'm excited to hear this class.

Wrong word

Hear

Listen

Correct      participate in, take,

 

Gwangju is famous of delicious dish.

Wrong preposition

Correct                  famous for

 

I`m very happy to meet all of you and I wanna be with you closely.

Wrong word      to be with someone – to have a romantic relationship with someone

Correct               to be close with someone  -   to be good friends

 

Rice is mainly eaten in the cafeteria.

Wrong word   rice

Correct word                  meals, ie breakfast, lunch , and dinner.

I usually eat my meals in the cafeteria.

 

Of course I played with them soccer, football and so on.

Word order

Of course I played soccer, football, and so on with them.

 

Let's get along with together this semester.

Correct   to get along                  to get along with someone

Let’s get along with each other this semester.

 

This semester I live in dormitory Hanul.

Word order

Hanul dormitory

 

I grew up in Cheonan, Cheonan spent all of my school days.

Run on sentence

I spent all of my school days in Cheonan.

 

Summer vacation is approaching the future, I plan to go on a trip with friends.

Run on sentence

Summer vacation is approaching.  I plan to go on a trip with friends.

 

I'm not good at English. so I'm afraid english but well I want to english.

 

Above all, Byungcheon doesn't have anything to play with, so I can't tell you about it.  Though I can't go outside to play, I'm fine that I'm making friends here.

Wrong word          play

Correct word               to hang out           to hang out with someone

 

 

Here is a great place to live because as you know people are kindness and mindful.

Form                       kindness, noun

Kind, adjective

 

I'm pleased you are my professor and expect next monday.

Wrong word      expect

Correct       to look forward to

If you want to see my play come to our performance

Missing object

If you want to see me play the guitar come to our performance.